Age/Gender: 20, Male
Location: Seguin
Job: Unemployed
Yo. Just hangin' around. Go away and have a nice day.
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That was annoying. Tell your character to shut up. Seriously. I can see what's going on, you don't HAVE to say everything out loud. You get a star for subtitles. I couldn't take it after the first few minutes.
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Your flash is very good, but I think a little practice could help. Your drawing skills are good in some departments, but lacking in others. My advice would be to contact someone who knows more about this than me. Your design and direction are extremely good and your artistic impression of the song was very impressive.
On a side note, may i ask about the "creepy dancer's" change of face? Just curious.
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Originality comes in many forms.
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what you did there.
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"Good flash, voice acting needs work."
The art was very well done, all in all. But the voice acting on this was, I must admit, terrible. I was surprised to read afterwards you did both voices. But I could tell you were going through the lines in a sing-song voice. I would have suggested you sing it straight or try to find a friend to. Again, the art, theme, story was great, but over shadowed by audio flaws.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment <3. Everyone has been telling me that the voice acting is terrible xD. I don't think I can do anything to fix this, but I'll try to improve on my next submissions xD.
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If this is your first flash, I think that this is an awesome, long, flash love story. Its art is sub-par, but I can over look that. I'm glad you put enough thought and effort into this, and I hope you put as much into the rest of your life with your girl.
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Take that this is a sample of womething more, add a decent idea, put a working if unimaginitive execution, and you get 6 stars. Just needs more.
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Something I peronally haven't seen before, so it was kina fun to mix and match. I had the layer bug, too. It made the female's purple, midriff shirt stick even when i changed genders.
Author's Response:
This has been fixed.
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Not bad. I see this as more of a submission aimed at other submitters, but I enjoyed it as well.
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Join the ranks of mediocrity. also, you mispelled 'his' in the end text.
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